I may have stumbled onto a crime scene (1 Viewer)

[Mrs. BSR]

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Where did he go and who are the 4 guests?

 

[bueno]

Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.

They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!

and a gun.

NO! That's just what they'd be expecting you to do!

Right! You're gonna need a rattlesnake for this kind of job.

Exactly. They never see the rattlesnake coming.

Freakin amateur 's. Everyone knows that rattlesnakes make a lot of noise and warn the target. If you want it done right, get a mamba. And some pheromone.

Aren't there copperheads in that part of the world?

 

[RC94]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

 

[Bob Lee Swagger]

Assuming that this story is entirely 100% true... how well would this thread hold up as evidence of flyingv's innocence in a court of law?

 

[randall146]

Just re-read today's events.

It seems odd that the DT would have you lead the way driving up the mountain and then walking downhill for 20 minutes (1 mile or more?) but then have you not show the way the last 80 yards to the blanket spot.

I think the DT knows more than he lets on. He walked up the hill with the PS and they both went into the pool area where you couldn't see them. The DT may have told the PS only to look in a certain place, or not to look around at all. The DT then decided enough time had passed to make his search believable, and he came back out and looked elsewhere, trying to get the PS to come out too.

The PS then made his job easier by not knowing the difference between a deer carcass and the remains of a naive young lass. DT says "that's just an animal", let's leave.

The way this went down, they could never have seen the blanket area, have found some animal bones, and decided they'd looked enough. But they weren't supposed to be looking for bones - they were looking for the blanket, or the remains of the blanket. WHy wouldn't the DT have invited you up initially, or after doing his own search, and asked you where you saw the blanket, just to make sure?

 

[randall146]

Assuming that this story is entirely 100% true... how well would this thread hold up as evidence of flyingv's innocence in a court of law?

None well.

 

[Flying V]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

 

[Bob Lee Swagger]

Assuming that this story is entirely 100% true... how well would this thread hold up as evidence of flyingv's innocence in a court of law?

None well.

Just wondering if we all might get some national TV time. Interviews, stuff like that.

 

[e-mom]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

Can you call and ask? Would a report of this trek need to be filed with the police even if it didn't amount to anything?

 

[GStrot]

Where is the blanket!?

It wasn't found.

so naive.What was in the backpack?

Duh.

Redundant question on my part.

 

[Flying V]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

Can you call and ask? Would a report of this trek need to be filed with the police even if it didn't amount to anything?

I could, but if it's something he didn't want me to hear, I doubt he'll tell me.Maybe I should ask the cop friend of a friend what he can find out...ya think?

 

[e-mom]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

Can you call and ask? Would a report of this trek need to be filed with the police even if it didn't amount to anything?

I could, but if it's something he didn't want me to hear, I doubt he'll tell me.Maybe I should ask the cop friend of a friend what he can find out...ya think?

That was going to be my next question.

 

[Mrs. BSR]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

Can you call and ask? Would a report of this trek need to be filed with the police even if it didn't amount to anything?

I could, but if it's something he didn't want me to hear, I doubt he'll tell me.Maybe I should ask the cop friend of a friend what he can find out...ya think?

Do it now, please, and report back immediately!

 

[Flying V]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

Can you call and ask? Would a report of this trek need to be filed with the police even if it didn't amount to anything?

I could, but if it's something he didn't want me to hear, I doubt he'll tell me.Maybe I should ask the cop friend of a friend what he can find out...ya think?

Do it now, please, and report back immediately!

I'm on it!

 

[randall146]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

Can you call and ask? Would a report of this trek need to be filed with the police even if it didn't amount to anything?

I could, but if it's something he didn't want me to hear, I doubt he'll tell me.Maybe I should ask the cop friend of a friend what he can find out...ya think?

Do it now, please, and report back immediately!

I'm on it!

I thought the perky young DA was the friend?

 

[Flying V]

Why didn't you go with them to investigate when you were there before? Just because DT says to sit and stay, that doesn't mean that you have to. He has no authority over you.

I'm only a #### on message boards. In real life, I'm a pretty easy going guy. If he wanted me to stay out of the way while he investigated, that was fine by me. I still don't have a good reason to doubt his word, but I AM pretty curious what he said to PS.

Can you call and ask? Would a report of this trek need to be filed with the police even if it didn't amount to anything?

I could, but if it's something he didn't want me to hear, I doubt he'll tell me.Maybe I should ask the cop friend of a friend what he can find out...ya think?

Do it now, please, and report back immediately!

I'm on it!

I thought the perky young DA was the friend?

I have a friend that used to work in the DA’s office, and the cop is a friend of hers.

 

[Mrs. BSR]

I'm on it!

So did you call?

 

[bueno]

I'm on it!

So did you call?

Man, women are so impatient when it comes to gossip!

 

[Tick]

What a spectacular way to "kill" an alias - I am betting "Flying V" never returns and becomes immortal in FBG folklore!!

That would be the best shtick ever, I think.

 

[Tick]

Sorry about the delayed update. Had to do some shopping before the kids got home from school.We had agreed to meet in a parking lot at 9:30, and when I got there five minutes early, DT and Psychic Sam were already there discussing the case. DT looked like what you would expect a retired cop to look like (sort of like Brian Keith), but I was surprised to find that PS was actually a pretty young looking guy that looked like a Mormon dressed for a day of door knocking and evangelizing. I wish I had asked him what he did for a living.Now when I was leaving the house this morning, I noticed it looked like rain, so I put on a cap that I haven’t worn in months. The cap has an embroidered emblem of Smokey the Bear on it that says “Only You” under it. As I introduced myself, PS looked at me kind of funny and turned to DT and said “There’s the hat.” DT said nothing and maintained a perfect poker face. PS explained to me that he was just telling DT that he figured a state trooper would provide an important clue to the case because he had repeatedly envisioned the words “Smokey Bear hat”. I thought to myself “Jeez, this guy’s gonna start messing with my head right off the bat!”I suggested that we park one vehicle down where the blue trail meets the road and then drive another couple of miles up the dirt road to the top of the mountain. I explained that I wasn’t confident I could find the spot as easily coming from below, but from the ridge, I was pretty sure I could lead them right to it. As I was driving them up the mountain in my truck, the conversation was mostly from PS. DT was stoic as an old Indian, and never let on that he thought PS was just a wack job. Then, out of the blue, PS turns to me and says “I sense that a male figure very close to you is frustrated that communicating with you has been difficult.” What?! I’m quiet for a minute as I try to figure out what the hell he’s talking about.Then PS says “Is your father suffering from Alzheimer’s?”Actually, my father died about five years ago after dealing with Parkinson’s and, near the end, Alzheimer’s disease. I decided to play it close to the vest and just answered “My father has been deceased for some time now.”PS: A son with Autism, maybe?My ten year old son is autistic and didn’t say his first words until a year or two ago. Even now, he very rarely speaks. “Yes, I have an autistic son.” I glanced over at DT, but he was looking straight ahead and showing no cracks in that stone face of his. Finally we reached the spot where the trail crosses the ridge road, and we got out and started walking down the mountain. It was about a twenty minute walk to where I thought we were getting close (I thought PS would ask to take the lead, but he seemed content to follow), and soon I realized I had passed the Rhododendron patch and I stopped to get my bearings. I spotted where the spring came back out of the ground and directed their attention uphill about eighty yards. “The game trail into the pool is on the left side of that patch up there.” DT checked for signal on his cell phone, pulled a small back pack off his shoulder, and instructed me to wait where I was while he and PS went up to investigate. I sat on a rock, lit a little cigar, and watched their progress.They disappeared into the thick cover around the pool and after about five minutes, DT came back out and forced his way into another patch of thick cover a little ways farther along the hillside. Soon he reemerged and started exploring the brush on the opposite side of the Rhododendron patch. Then I heard a shout from PS. DT came back out of the brush, called out “What is it?”P: Bones!DT quickly crawled back into the tunnel to join PS at the pool. In less than a minute, they came back out, tried to get some of the mud off their knees, and started down the hill towards me. Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.When they got close to me, I was on my feet and I asked “Bones?!”DT: Just part of a deer carcass.ME: No blanket?DT: No. Something must have dragged it off, or maybe somebody else found it. I don’t know.ME: Nothing at all then?DT: There’s been a lot of activity here over the years. We’re not going to get anything useful from around here. In ten minutes, we were down the mountain and at DT’s Blazer. PS had very little to say for a change, and they drove me back up to my truck, thanked me, shook hands, and they were off. As soon as I got home, I called my sister and asked if she had ever mentioned Dad or my son to Bill when he was at her shop. When I told her why I was asking, she figured it was a pretty good possibility. I guess we’ll have to wait until Bill’s next hair appointment to find out anything I don’t already know. I hope my sister is good and nosey.

Dammit, you ruined the best shtick ever.

 

[Tick]

I've really enjoyed the story but this last bit was just a little too over the top.

100% agreement here.

 

[RC94]

I've really enjoyed the story but this last bit was just a little too over the top.

100% agreement here.

I agree as well. Well thought out and written, though.

 

[tri-man 47]

I was surprised to find that PS was actually a pretty, young looking guy.

Fixed (comma).Serious, I'd go back up to see what they might have seen, or see if the blanket's truly gone. If the spot was that isolated, hard to believe that the blanket's now gone. I think they wanted to find the site, and then get you the heck away from there.

 

[Flying V]

I've really enjoyed the story but this last bit was just a little too over the top.

100% agreement here.

I agree as well. Well thought out and written, though.

Over the top? Seems fairly anticlimatic to me. What if I had described how PS led us straight to a body. Would that have been more believable?I'm amazed at how much more you people are reading into this then the plain facts.

 

[Hov34]

Wrap this #### up B.

 

[shuke]

I've really enjoyed the story but this last bit was just a little too over the top.

100% agreement here.

I agree as well. Well thought out and written, though.

Over the top? Seems fairly anticlimatic to me. What if I had described how PS led us straight to a body. Would that have been more believable?I'm amazed at how much more you people are reading into this then the plain facts.

Oh come on. The backpack, insisting on making you wait, the out-of-earshot confrontation, the psychic's change in attitude. What book are you stealing this story from?

 

[Tick]

I've really enjoyed the story but this last bit was just a little too over the top.

100% agreement here.

I agree as well. Well thought out and written, though.

Over the top? Seems fairly anticlimatic to me. What if I had described how PS led us straight to a body. Would that have been more believable?I'm amazed at how much more you people are reading into this then the plain facts.

Oh come on. The backpack, insisting on making you wait, the out-of-earshot confrontation, the psychic's change in attitude. What book are you stealing this story from?

Ooo, I just had a REALLY good idea... I'll let things die down a bit, but look for a fake story from me sometime in the next two years or so.

 

[JNox3]

Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.

DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.

I solved this case. It was Col Mustard, with the rope in the library!!!!

 

[Flying V]

I got a call from Bill this morning thanking me for my help. I think he was pretty disappointed in the results because he asked me if I was absolutely sure I had the right spot. I asked him if he minded that I call PS to ask him what the conversation with DT as they were leaving was about, and he gave me the number.

According to PS, this is what was said:

DT: So are we done here? I don’t want to have to come back up here over these rocks and crawling through mud again if I don’t have to.

PS: I’m getting nothing. It’s either the wrong place or the wrong blanket.

DT: Are you sure you don’t want to check out the brush on either side of this spot?

PS: No.

DT: You’re not going to drag Bill up here?

PS:

DT: Then we can cross this place off the list?

PS: (Nods in affirmation)

See! You guys are making a big deal out of nothing. Please stop in my thread.

 

[Flying V]

ALTERNATE ENDING

Out of curiosity, I went back up there at midnight and discovered DT and PS eating the raw guts of Bills still barely conscience body. I was brutally raped and also devoured. Could somebody please hire a psychic to find my body? Thanks, FryingV.

 

[Buckychudd]

ALTERNATE ENDINGOut of curiosity, I went back up there at midnight and discovered DT and PS eating the raw guts of Bills still barely conscience body. I was brutally raped and also devoured. Could somebody please hire a psychic to find my body? Thanks, FryingV.

Thanks! That's the ending we needed.

 

[Bluestaples]

ALTERNATE ENDINGOut of curiosity, I went back up there at midnight and discovered DT and PS eating the raw guts of Bills still barely conscience body. I was brutally raped and also devoured. Could somebody please hire a psychic to find my body? Thanks, FryingV.

 

[Buckychudd]

ALTERNATE ENDINGOut of curiosity, I went back up there at midnight and discovered DT and PS eating the raw guts of Bills still barely conscience body. I was brutally raped and also devoured. Could somebody please hire a psychic to find my body? Thanks, FryingV.

Thanks! That's the ending we needed.

P.S. This wouldn't have happened if you would have brought a rattlesnake like we told you to.

 

[Wooderson]

ALTERNATE ENDINGOut of curiosity, I went back up there at midnight and discovered DT and PS eating the raw guts of Bills still barely conscience body. I was brutally raped and also devoured. Could somebody please hire a psychic to find my body? Thanks, FryingV.

Thanks! That's the ending we needed.

P.S. This wouldn't have happened if you would have brought a rattlesnake like we told you to.

Read it agian. There was a snake involved make no mistake.

 

[Ibis81]

Nice way to leave the door open.

 

[Hov34]

jesus, that sucked.

 

[GStrot]

I got a call from Bill this morning thanking me for my help. I think he was pretty disappointed in the results because he asked me if I was absolutely sure I had the right spot. I asked him if he minded that I call PS to ask him what the conversation with DT as they were leaving was about, and he gave me the number.According to PS, this is what was saidT: So are we done here? I don’t want to have to come back up here over these rocks and crawling through mud again if I don’t have to.PS: I’m getting nothing. It’s either the wrong place or the wrong blanket.DT: Are you sure you don’t want to check out the brush on either side of this spot?PS: No.DT: You’re not going to drag Bill up here?PS: DT: Then we can cross this place off the list?PS: (Nods in affirmation)See! You guys are making a big deal out of nothing. Please stop in my thread.

I would still go back and check it out myself. If nothing else, you get the blanket.

 

[Nigel Tufnel]

FryingV.

And he was Asian all along.

 

[randall146]

FryingV.

And he was Asian all along.

Ah, soooooo.

 

[randall146]

PAGING ZALF -

Please write a satisfactory ending to I May Have Stumbled Onto a Crime Scene

 

[rolyaTy]

So a psychic was actually unable to solve the crime or find the murder scene? Color me unsurprised.

 

[BroncoFreak_2K3]

jesus, that sucked.

agreed

 

[BroncoFreak_2K3]

PAGING ZALF -

Please write a satisfactory ending to I May Have Stumbled Onto a Crime Scene

 

[Ibis81]

But what about the brush on either side? Why wouldn't they check the brush?

 

[Hov34]

PAGING ZALF -

Please write a satisfactory ending to I May Have Stumbled Onto a Crime Scene

Change title to The Pullman BlanketTIA

 

[randall146]

PAGING ZALF -

Please write a satisfactory ending to I May Have Stumbled Onto a Crime Scene

Change title to The Pullman BlanketTIA

OK but the movie will be Finding Pullman, starring Bill Pullman as flyingv, Tommy Lee Jones as the private ####, and John Mark Karr as the pretty young psychic.

 

[Zalf]

PAGING ZALF -

Please write a satisfactory ending to I May Have Stumbled Onto a Crime Scene

Newest info from flyingv gained via a psychic vision:Phone rings

flyingv: Hello.

flyingv's sister: What the hell is going on?

flyingv: What are you talking about?

flyingv's sister: A whole bunch of police just pulled up.

flyingv: Huh?

flyingv's sister: I think some of them are even from the FBI. They have dogs and everything. They have a warrant to search for The Pullman Blanket(subtle title switch).

flyingv: You didnt tell them where it is did you?

flyingv's sister: How could I? I havent seen that thing in years. Last time I remember seeing it, is when you ....................asked to borrow it.(long awkward silence)

You dont know anything about this do you?

flyingv: How can you even ask that?

flyingv's sister: Sorry, Im just really nervous. The police are all over the place and the horses are going crazy. And there's some weird looking young guy that keeps holding his head and pointing the police in different directions.

flyingv: They dont know you called me do they?

flyingv's sister: (slight pause. almost too slight to notice. almost.) Uh...No.

flyingv: Good. If they ask, just tell them you havent talked to me in a while. I have to go take care of something.

(click of the phone hanging up)



Cut to flyingv's sister's kitchen.

flyingv's sister: Ok I did what you asked. I told you he didnt have anything to do with any of this. And I really hate lieing to my brother.

Special Agent Smith and Special Agent Starling share a knowing glance

Special Agent Smith:(solemnly) We understand, but the best way to help your brother is to cooperate with us. We all want to prove your brother had nothing to do with this.

As they turn to leave the kitchen the camera stays with the Special Agents long enough to catch the not so solemn smirks on their faces.

 

[Hov34]

PAGING ZALF -

Please write a satisfactory ending to I May Have Stumbled Onto a Crime Scene

Newest info from flyingv gained via a psychic vision:Phone rings

flyingv: Hello.

flyingv's sister: What the hell is going on?

flyingv: What are you talking about?

flyingv's sister: A whole bunch of police just pulled up.

flyingv: Huh?

flyingv's sister: I think some of them are even from the FBI. They have dogs and everything. They have a warrant to search for The Pullman Blanket(subtle title switch).

flyingv: You didnt tell them where it is did you?

flyingv's sister: How could I? I havent seen that thing in years. Last time I remember seeing it, is when you ....................asked to borrow it.(long awkward silence)

You dont know anything about this do you?

flyingv: How can you even ask that?

flyingv's sister: Sorry, Im just really nervous. The police are all over the place and the horses are going crazy. And there's some weird looking young guy that keeps holding his head and pointing the police in different directions.

flyingv: They dont know you called me do they?

flyingv's sister: (slight pause. almost too slight to notice. almost.) Uh...No.

flyingv: Good. If they ask, just tell them you havent talked to me in a while. I have to go take care of something.

(click of the phone hanging up)



Cut to flyingv's sister's kitchen.

flyingv's sister: Ok I did what you asked. I told you he didnt have anything to do with any of this. And I really hate lieing to my brother.

Special Agent Smith and Special Agent Starling share a knowing glance

Special Agent Smith:(solemnly) We understand, but the best way to help your brother is to cooperate with us. We all want to prove your brother had nothing to do with this.

As they turn to leave the kitchen the camera stays with the Special Agents long enough to catch the not so solemn smirks on their faces.

Those bastards!!!

 

[Stoneys]

PAGING ZALF -

Please write a satisfactory ending to I May Have Stumbled Onto a Crime Scene

Newest info from flyingv gained via a psychic vision:Phone rings

flyingv: Hello.

flyingv's sister: What the hell is going on?

flyingv: What are you talking about?

flyingv's sister: A whole bunch of police just pulled up.

flyingv: Huh?

flyingv's sister: I think some of them are even from the FBI. They have dogs and everything. They have a warrant to search for The Pullman Blanket(subtle title switch).

flyingv: You didnt tell them where it is did you?

flyingv's sister: How could I? I havent seen that thing in years. Last time I remember seeing it, is when you ....................asked to borrow it.(long awkward silence)

You dont know anything about this do you?

flyingv: How can you even ask that?

flyingv's sister: Sorry, Im just really nervous. The police are all over the place and the horses are going crazy. And there's some weird looking young guy that keeps holding his head and pointing the police in different directions.

flyingv: They dont know you called me do they?

flyingv's sister: (slight pause. almost too slight to notice. almost.) Uh...No.

flyingv: Good. If they ask, just tell them you havent talked to me in a while. I have to go take care of something.

(click of the phone hanging up)



Cut to flyingv's sister's kitchen.

flyingv's sister: Ok I did what you asked. I told you he didnt have anything to do with any of this. And I really hate lieing to my brother.

Special Agent Smith and Special Agent Starling share a knowing glance

Special Agent Smith:(solemnly) We understand, but the best way to help your brother is to cooperate with us. We all want to prove your brother had nothing to do with this.

As they turn to leave the kitchen the camera stays with the Special Agents long enough to catch the not so solemn smirks on their faces.

Nice!!

 

[Flying V]

But what about the brush on either side? Why wouldn't they check the brush?

Page 5..."They disappeared into the thick cover around the pool and after about five minutes, DT came back out and forced his way into another patch of thick cover a little ways farther along the hillside. Soon he reemerged and started exploring the brush on the opposite side of the Rhododendron patch."Sorry, I'm sure Polecat or Zalf could have described this much more clearly than I.