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I may have stumbled onto a crime scene (1 Viewer)

Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
and a gun.
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
I figured DT was just telling PS not to share his visions with me because it would be considered unprofessional. But what DT was really concerned about was PS recruiting me as an ally to convince Bill to stick with him. I could be wrong, but that was all I could come up with. If it was an actual crime scene, DT would have been on his cell phone to his cop buddies while we were still on the scene.
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
I figured DT was just telling PS not to share his visions with me because it would be considered unprofessional. But what DT was really concerned about was PS recruiting me as an ally to convince Bill to stick with him. I could be wrong, but that was all I could come up with. If it was an actual crime scene, DT would have been on his cell phone to his cop buddies while we were still on the scene.
Do you know that he had a signal?
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
I figured DT was just telling PS not to share his visions with me because it would be considered unprofessional. But what DT was really concerned about was PS recruiting me as an ally to convince Bill to stick with him. I could be wrong, but that was all I could come up with. If it was an actual crime scene, DT would have been on his cell phone to his cop buddies while we were still on the scene.
Do you know that he had a signal?
Well, he checked for it. Wether he actually did or not, I couldn't say.
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
Don't forget the sniper backup. I'm super serial here.
 
You should go back up there alone and see what they found.
:goodposting: Why aren't you there now!!!!!!
:confused: DT said they didn't find anything. Am I being really naive here?
Animal bones? Really?
Hell, yeah. I find animal bones in the woods all the time. Plenty of hunters will just dump the carcass along a back road once they've got the meat off of it (damn slobs).
While it's plausible for the terrain, it's not probable for the story. Why would the PI have a quick hushed word with the Psychic otw down? Why would the psychic be quiet on the return trip when he was so talkative coming out? They found something and they don't want you involved.
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
and a gun.
NO! That's just what they'd be expecting you to do! :eek:
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
and a gun.
NO! That's just what they'd be expecting you to do! :eek:
Right! You're gonna need a rattlesnake for this kind of job.
 
They found buried treasure and they're trying to cut you out of your share. ARGHH!

Where was the blanket? It couldn't have just disappeared.

 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.

 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
Don't let me get in the way of the continued story, but I'd be careful going back up there.
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
duh.
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
please come back and update when completed ... thanks:blackdot:
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
I'm just really surprised that you didn't take a look for yourself. I would have to know. Do you know if the back pack was ever opened when they said they found the deer carcass? When exactly was the last time that you were at that location again? How long ago?
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
:goodposting: :zebco:

 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
I'm just really surprised that you didn't take a look for yourself. I would have to know. Do you know if the back pack was ever opened when they said they found the deer carcass? When exactly was the last time that you were at that location again? How long ago?
Early April. But when I was there, the only thing I was looking for was a way through the brush. I only saw the blanket because it was right on the trail out of the pool. Those deer bones could have been there and I just never saw them. If they were really trying to hide something as a team, why would PS call out that he found bones?

 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
and a gun.
NO! That's just what they'd be expecting you to do! :eek:
Right! You're gonna need a rattlesnake for this kind of job.
Exactly. They never see the rattlesnake coming. :ninja:
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
I'm just really surprised that you didn't take a look for yourself. I would have to know. Do you know if the back pack was ever opened when they said they found the deer carcass? When exactly was the last time that you were at that location again? How long ago?
Early April. But when I was there, the only thing I was looking for was a way through the brush. I only saw the blanket because it was right on the trail out of the pool. Those deer bones could have been there and I just never saw them. If they were really trying to hide something as a team, why would PS call out that he found bones?
The detective is trying to hide something. You need to find out what that something is.Quit typing, start hiking.

 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
I'm just really surprised that you didn't take a look for yourself. I would have to know. Do you know if the back pack was ever opened when they said they found the deer carcass? When exactly was the last time that you were at that location again? How long ago?
Early April. But when I was there, the only thing I was looking for was a way through the brush. I only saw the blanket because it was right on the trail out of the pool. Those deer bones could have been there and I just never saw them. If they were really trying to hide something as a team, why would PS call out that he found bones?
Probably because he wanted to see :eek: reaction. Seriously, did "Bill" freak out when he said he found bones?
 
Early April. But when I was there, the only thing I was looking for was a way through the brush. I only saw the blanket because it was right on the trail out of the pool. Those deer bones could have been there and I just never saw them.

If they were really trying to hide something as a team, why would PS call out that he found bones?
Because they were planning on killing you anyway. But DT stopped him, made up a quick cover story about "animal" bones, and let you live. As a retired detective hitman, he could tell you were too niave to be a threat. But he didn't account for us meddling kids on FBG to foil his nefarious plans!
 
Suddenly DT stopped and turned around to PS, putting his hand on his chest to stop him. Then DT said something in a low voice accompanied with lots of hand gestures, PS nodded in affirmation, and they walked down to me.
They're hiding something. And decided at that moment to not kill you. I bet they're moving the dead girl to another location. You should get back up there with a video camera, quick!
and a gun.
NO! That's just what they'd be expecting you to do! :eek:
Right! You're gonna need a rattlesnake for this kind of job.
Exactly. They never see the rattlesnake coming. :ninja:
Freakin amateur :ninja: 's. Everyone knows that rattlesnakes make a lot of noise and warn the target. If you want it done right, get a mamba. And some pheromone.
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
I'm just really surprised that you didn't take a look for yourself. I would have to know. Do you know if the back pack was ever opened when they said they found the deer carcass? When exactly was the last time that you were at that location again? How long ago?
Early April. But when I was there, the only thing I was looking for was a way through the brush. I only saw the blanket because it was right on the trail out of the pool. Those deer bones could have been there and I just never saw them. If they were really trying to hide something as a team, why would PS call out that he found bones?
Probably because he wanted to see :eek: reaction. Seriously, did "Bill" freak out when he said he found bones?
As I said earlier, DT wouldn't allow Bill to join us. But now that I think of it, Bill HAS to be more curious than I am about this. What are the odds that he and PS return there later today now that they know where it is?
 
Did you ask why they were being so quiet on the way back? There has to be something they aren't telling you.
DT was always quiet. I figure PS was either dissappointed that they found nothing, or DT had told him to not bother telling me what kind of visions he might have imagined.You know, you people are starting to freak me out a little. I thought this was pretty much done with as far as I was concerned, but now I'm thinking maybe I should go back up there and check it out.
I'm just really surprised that you didn't take a look for yourself. I would have to know. Do you know if the back pack was ever opened when they said they found the deer carcass? When exactly was the last time that you were at that location again? How long ago?
Early April. But when I was there, the only thing I was looking for was a way through the brush. I only saw the blanket because it was right on the trail out of the pool. Those deer bones could have been there and I just never saw them. If they were really trying to hide something as a team, why would PS call out that he found bones?
Probably because he wanted to see :eek: reaction. Seriously, did "Bill" freak out when he said he found bones?
As I said earlier, DT wouldn't allow Bill to join us. But now that I think of it, Bill HAS to be more curious than I am about this. What are the odds that he and PS return there later today now that they know where it is?
AND TAKE ALL THE CREDIT.You are missing out on your chance for the reward.

 
DT hushed up PS because you are the primary suspect for whatever they did find. You wont have to worry about hiking back out there, because the local police will be coming by to bring you in any time now.

 
If they were really trying to hide something as a team, why would PS call out that he found bones?
Because PS is a little light in the loafers and new to this whole "framing a witness" thing. DT is a pro at it. I bet it went something like this:PS walks up to the scene and pulls the old blanket off the ground. The scene is exactly as he visioned in his mind. He knows instinctively where the bones are and he gets on his knees to dig. Two feet below the loosely packed underbrush, PS's fingers grab what he knows is the missing girl's skull. "Bones!" screams PS. He then feels the butt of DT's revolver crash into the side of his temple. DT's hot breath is in PS's ear as he whispers angrily, "#######it PS, do I have to draw you a picture? He's a rube, see? A Patsy." As PS rubs the side of his head, fear and understanding fill his eyes. "But the Smokey the Bear hat, he can't, he can't, he's got to be a good guy." "Good or bad don't matter, see? I need a closed case or I don't get my pension, and this case is just what I need." says DT, waiving his old service revolver casually with one hand while packing the old Pullman blanket into the backpack with the other.
 
You should go back up there alone and see what they found.
:goodposting: Why aren't you there now!!!!!!
:confused: DT said they didn't find anything. Am I being really naive here?
Animal bones? Really?
Hell, yeah. I find animal bones in the woods all the time. Plenty of hunters will just dump the carcass along a back road once they've got the meat off of it (damn slobs).
While it's plausible for the terrain, it's not probable for the story. Why would the PI have a quick hushed word with the Psychic otw down? Why would the psychic be quiet on the return trip when he was so talkative coming out? They found something and they don't want you involved.
Damn, these are some good questions. It does seem very odd that the psychic would be so quiet all of a sudden after the hushed words from the PI. :unsure:
 
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If I was going to go back up there, it wouldn't be alone...

Grab some buddies, and case the place.....

How about renting a helicopter...do some overhead recon

 
GREAT Schtick. Next time I read a novel, I'm going to post like I'm the lead character and the plot is actually happening to me. Then, as the plot unfolds, I'll relay what's happening in the book. GENIUS!!!
Thank you. Know any publishers?

 

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