50 Shades of Grey (1 Viewer)

[shadyridr]

Let's see it

 

[Insein]

Had to check this thread on page 1 in case there was another one coming out...Oh please no.

It actually makes me angry that something so poorly done has made someone so much money (guess that's why I can't be a Lions or Bowns fan). This was the most pathetic rubbish I have ever seen in erotica but like a lot of you guys, the wife LOVED it and I know several who did.

50 SOG came up at a wedding a few years ago and when I trashed it a friend of my wife's defended it. I told her I could write something better than that and after one thing leading to another, I did. I don't think she has ever looked me in the eye since. That's not a brag, just a testimony that if I, an untrained person, can half-bake an idea and do better, it is really sad that there are authors out there that got bested by this garbage.

Well, yea. It was literally a Twilight fanfiction. A very poorly written Twilight fanfiction. All it was missing was dude on dude action and its a typical fangirl fanfiction (unless it does have that I haven't seen or read it).

 

[Tom Servo]

Had to check this thread on page 1 in case there was another one coming out...Oh please no.

It actually makes me angry that something so poorly done has made someone so much money (guess that's why I can't be a Lions or Bowns fan). This was the most pathetic rubbish I have ever seen in erotica but like a lot of you guys, the wife LOVED it and I know several who did.

50 SOG came up at a wedding a few years ago and when I trashed it a friend of my wife's defended it. I told her I could write something better than that and after one thing leading to another, I did. I don't think she has ever looked me in the eye since. That's not a brag, just a testimony that if I, an untrained person, can half-bake an idea and do better, it is really sad that there are authors out there that got bested by this garbage.

Post it or GTFO.