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Footballguy
Some takeaways:This is a fascinating read. Highly recommended.
https://www.buzzfeednews.com/article/rosiegray/katie-mchugh
1. it was frustrating to read from a storytelling point of view, because the author initially glossed over McHugh's downfall (saving it for the back half of the story), which makes it difficult for the reader to put things into context.
2. the first half of the article is little more than a boring timeline. Too much exposition, not enough drama. GET TO THE STORY!
3. I was surprised to learn that anyone at Breitbart would be concerned (let alone upset) that McHugh was associating with white supremacists. This seems like a topic that should have been explored further.
4. I'm not a fan of the author's tactic of accessing McHugh's email account, reading other people's private emails, and then forwarding those emails to potential interview subjects. That tactic got two people fired.
5. McHugh is not a sympathetic character. She comes off as a disgruntled ex-employee who decided to burn bridges because she couldn't land a job and couldn't get her essay published. She says she's changed but she seems to carry the same hatred as before, except that now the hatred is directed at her former compatriots.
6. the article briefly touches on the concepts of deprogramming, forgiveness, and redemption, but fails to address any of them in depth. If McHugh has been deprogrammed, forgiven, or redeemed, the author certainly doesn't provide much evidence of any of it.