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Best way to share personal music online?(now with an upload) (1 Viewer)

Mors Venit

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My band has a pretty good studio recording of one of our best songs.

What would be the best way to post it somewhere i can link to in order to get feedback from the board?

 
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A little backstory.

This was the third week since i joined the project. Complete live one take. Only has one guitar because we are still looking for another.

Its me on all vocals

 
The vocals don't fit the style at all. There's a definite Cradle of Filth vibe from the band but the vocals trudge when the music is uptempo. Not sure what the Butthead sounding vocals were for just over 2 minutes in and around the 3 minute mark, the whole thing fell apart.
There are some points in here i would have enjoyed duscussing had they been presented constructively and not by some butthead trying to push my buttons
 
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The vocals don't fit the style at all. There's a definite Cradle of Filth vibe from the band but the vocals trudge when the music is uptempo. Not sure what the Butthead sounding vocals were for just over 2 minutes in and around the 3 minute mark, the whole thing fell apart.
There are some points in here i would have enjoyed duscussing had they been presented constructively and not by some butthead trying to push my buttons
Wasn't pushing any buttons. Your vocals are too focused on pushing out the low, slow growl when the band is doing the opposite. The "Butthead" comment was because that's what it sounded like, Butthead interrupting the singer. It was distracting and unnecessary. The song did fall apart around 3 minutes in as everyone seemed to start singing/doing whatever they wanted for no reason.

 
The vocals don't fit the style at all. There's a definite Cradle of Filth vibe from the band but the vocals trudge when the music is uptempo. Not sure what the Butthead sounding vocals were for just over 2 minutes in and around the 3 minute mark, the whole thing fell apart.
There are some points in here i would have enjoyed duscussing had they been presented constructively and not by some butthead trying to push my buttons
Wasn't pushing any buttons. Your vocals are too focused on pushing out the low, slow growl when the band is doing the opposite. The "Butthead" comment was because that's what it sounded like, Butthead interrupting the singer. It was distracting and unnecessary. The song did fall apart around 3 minutes in as everyone seemed to start singing/doing whatever they wanted for no reason.
Im buzzed and nearly drunk right now. I need to process this thoroughly. I will reply a bit later.

 
atrocitus!
Its hardly atrocious.
Is Cabal the band name?
Song title

I let the guys write the titles and i build off that.

When i came in about 70% of the music was done.

I helped with a few parts on a couple of songs and they came up with a choral harmony in a couple others.

1-2 left and we record the album in the summer.

Before that we are sitting down for a few weeks of heavy editing. Just rough cuts and writing going on now. I have a few other songs recorded but i posted this one because it had the best audio quality.

 
atrocitus!
Its hardly atrocious.
Is Cabal the band name?
Song title

I let the guys write the titles and i build off that.

When i came in about 70% of the music was done.

I helped with a few parts on a couple of songs and they came up with a choral harmony in a couple others.

1-2 left and we record the album in the summer.

Before that we are sitting down for a few weeks of heavy editing. Just rough cuts and writing going on now. I have a few other songs recorded but i posted this one because it had the best audio quality.
I think a few Bud Light Limes might help your vocals. What is the racial composition of this group?

 
Decent production and mix. Music was pretty good but your vocals waver to much.

i usually listen to music where i can understand the lyrics but if your going to do this

style you need to get/stay stronger throughout the song.

 
atrocitus!
Its hardly atrocious.
Is Cabal the band name?
Song titleI let the guys write the titles and i build off that.

When i came in about 70% of the music was done.

I helped with a few parts on a couple of songs and they came up with a choral harmony in a couple others.

1-2 left and we record the album in the summer.

Before that we are sitting down for a few weeks of heavy editing. Just rough cuts and writing going on now. I have a few other songs recorded but i posted this one because it had the best audio quality.
I think a few Bud Light Limes might help your vocals. What is the racial composition of this group?
A white guy and three immigrants from argentina

 
Jay, it sounds like you're fighting yourself with the different vocal styles. This is the second time everything started to fall apart around the 3 minute mark.

 
The vocals don't fit the style at all. There's a definite Cradle of Filth vibe from the band but the vocals trudge when the music is uptempo. Not sure what the Butthead sounding vocals were for just over 2 minutes in and around the 3 minute mark, the whole thing fell apart.
There are some points in here i would have enjoyed duscussing had they been presented constructively and not by some butthead trying to push my buttons
Wasn't pushing any buttons. Your vocals are too focused on pushing out the low, slow growl when the band is doing the opposite. The "Butthead" comment was because that's what it sounded like, Butthead interrupting the singer. It was distracting and unnecessary. The song did fall apart around 3 minutes in as everyone seemed to start singing/doing whatever they wanted for no reason.
Yeah, it felt like the band and singer are going at different speeds - I can feel the taffy pull going on between the two. The vocals are totally indeciphrable; I have no idea what the song is about.
 
Vocals much better on this one; you were understandable and not growling.Lyrics were meh for me but they could use tweaking. The tyrant of the song sounds nihilistic but in the middle ask "what do you want"? Seems like a disconnect to me.

Band sounds slowed down from the other song.

My advice would be to sit down and discuss your favorte bands and influences. Then take that information and write songs about topics that you feel passionate about. Decide what you want your sound to be.

If you were an opening act at a bar, right now I wouldn't turn from the bar to pay attention. But IMO, you have the ability to get better.

 
The "I love being a tyrant" part of the vocals is weak. No power. The rest of the vocals isn't

that good but not entirely bad either. Decent music but I wouldn't pay for it.

 

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